“Oh, mother dearest, you know how I detest it when you leave me out.” Mary pouts. It doesn’t look very nice. Her mother frowns at Mary. She really does need to have a talk with Mary about that silly pout of hers. Quite off-putting, it is. Makes her look like those frisky midnight maids, it does.
Yes. She really does need to have a talk with Mary about that silly pout of hers.
Her mother –an exquisitely aged woman lounges over a lavish burgundy carpet. Her fingers are slowly hovering over letters from her daughter’s suitors. Her over-sufficient bosom swings to and fro with each rather exaggerated movement. Her aged, plentiful breasts are amplified by a fanciful waist apron and they hang luxuriously over the strap of it, testing the waters of ‘socially acceptable’. And her leathery skin resembles the Medjool dates. The beads of perspiration glisten indignantly, challenging one to not notice them.
Mary flounces over to mother dearest and hands on hips, she bends at the waist. It’s a totally exaggerated bend, though. It has her back curving unnaturally and her hips too high. Her shirt hangs low, giving a generous view of her ample cleavage. It doesn’t look very nice. Mother dearest pretends to not notice.
“Well I figured I would just look through the letters. See if there’s anything you’d like.” Mother dearest responds with a smirk. The two of them had been at it for weeks now. Not a single letter had been rich enough to keep them reading. The aspirants were uninteresting, bland and rather poor in potential.
“Yes, Mother dearest.” Mary straightens up slowly. And with respect to her personality, she sneers, arching her back like a cat and her nose turned up. With her toe, she shuffles the photographs attached to the letters, “They are below me. They are below us. They are below everything our family represents. They are simply below.”
“Pity, my child, you aren’t spoken for.”
“Yes, mother dearest. Pity.”
Mary flops down upon the carpet to join mother dearest. She sits on the glossy pixelated face of a suitor. Lord Earl won’t be very pleased with that. He had the photo especially laminated, too.
WRITER: TUBA SHAMIM, 17
Ok wow, this was really good. As in, it was descriptive, and subtly humorous, and the last paragraph made me laugh xD I also love the subtle ways you show their personalities through their body language and the few words they exchange, it was amazing :3
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i’m glad you enjoyed it, thank-you for the support xx
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Unbelievably great!
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thankyou!
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Ok, so I ADORE this! I love how each of them are characterised, and the ending was subtly hilarious xD But yeah, keep writing!
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Thank-you! i appreciate your amazing comment T^T
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Fucking check it out already!
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This is just tooo good! Work well done Tuba 🙂 I loved it 💜🌹
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thanks for the support babe T^T
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I legit love the way you’ve written this. It’s beautiful
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Thank-you! appreciate it T^T
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This is naughty lol! You are an awesome writer! IT got a follow from me 😉
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hahaha, thanks! you’re an absolute doll!
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Hey Tuba! Great work again. The descriptions were on point. I loved it❤❤
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Thanks love! xo
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Wow! You are truly an exceptional writer. Especially, the fact that you made it so subtly explicit in such a beautiful way was inspirational. Looking forward for the next one… 🙂
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OMYGOD I DIDNT EVEN GET A NOTIFICATION AND MY BATTERY’S AT 10 OK CRAP HMM thankyou for the lovely feedback and haha subtly sexual is my thing right now. All my short stories are coming around to that right now. Oh i post a short story every 7th of a month but love if you’d like to read more by me i posted a new piece on panic attacks on 28 and uh ok self promo ill stop now. Fuck 6% ok
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Damn,that was fucking hilarious. Would’ve loved to read more… 👏🏻👏🏻 great job
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Aw love hahahaha thankyou! I’ll be uploading a short story every 7th of a month so you’ll most definitely have more to read 😉 thanks for commenting xx
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Ohh that’s awesome! I’ll be waiting then 🌺
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D’aww youre a sweetpea xx
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